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  • Tom Dills's avatar

    Tom Dills

    Very nice parallel lines. I’ll be interested to see how you feel about black and white, although I wondered about desaturating everything except the yellow line. An alternative might be to just darken the green grass or crop it out completely.

    • Monte Stevens's avatar

      Monte Stevens

      I’m not sure why I didn’t crop out the grass as it did cross my mind. I felt it would give more identifiction to what I was shooting. I’m going revise this image, letting it set for a while.

      • Cedric Canard's avatar

        Cedric Canard

        I think I’d keep the grass. It acts as an anchor point. Stops the picture from becoming too flat. It also gives the viewer a sense of recognition. Allows the eyes to cycle through the image from the top, to the bottom, and back up again to the top. I guess the yellow line could do the same job but the photo would have to stay in colour. Just a thought.

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