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  • Anita Jesse's avatar

    Anita Jesse

    So much for my brilliant idea. I think you hit it right on the mark with your question, “Is there enough contrast?” I think it would need quite a lot more to put the story across. (Listen to me, the quintessential know-nothing when it comes to black and white!) Now, I am scurrying back to the color version. Maybe I’ll just be quiet for a while.

    • Monte Stevens's avatar

      Monte Stevens

      Anita, I will need to work on this image some more. I like the feel of the image and the story but something seems to be missing and I’m not sure what. The first image i post processed it in Topaz Adjust and sort of liked it. I also sort of like the black and white one. Maybe I need to set it aside for awhile and see what germinates later.

  • pj's avatar

    pj

    I’ll disagree with Anita. A little more contrast wouldn’t hurt it any, but I don’t think it would make that much difference. This conveys the meaning of the photo quite well as it is. Either version works well for me.

  • Ken's avatar

    Ken

    It’s a very nice photo to begin with, Monte, and the conversion is well done. If I had to pick, I’m going with the color version simply because of the red hat and green tee shirt. Makes the photo sing.

  • Ove's avatar

    Ove

    Your right, the grey tone scale makes me think this was a rather dull moment. Maybe the father wanted a bigger ship. It’s all in the head of the viewer, if we want to communicate a specific feel, we have to emphasise it somehow.

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